BBr0stikNG's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[PAIN GIRL (PILOT)]

There’s a lotta of real potential here that can elevate this to something super special that I can already see from how well put together this pilot is. However, as many people have said already, there is a lack of a connective throughline for what the audience should care about given how little we know about these characters and the world-building. Again, given how this is only the pilot, things can only go up from here but there is something to be said about giving contrast to the senseless violence with something of real substance that the audience can latch onto. Comedic violence for the sake of it can be entertaining and fun, but unless there is something else that either supports it, contrasts that provide a more interesting variable for comedy and/or drama or just some sort of twist on the running gag/cliche of “something cute also being a psycho murderer” then it can very easily and quickly become stale and lack the impact/intent you are going for.

Overall tho, fairly solid pilot that can definitely be improved as it goes on, so I’m excited to see where it goes from here. Love the art style [Always a fan of line boil] and the designs are simple but appealing and get the job done. SFX are a lacking in impact a lil during fight scenes, but that can be fixed over time. Overall, keep up the great work and hope to see more from you in the near future.

[Mona has an idea...]

that sfx fuckin rocks

[Top and RabRab - Player 3]

This is great. Love the artstyle in how reminiscent it is of Paper Mario/cutout aesthetics and the humour and jokes were snappy and got a laugh out of me. Definitely excited to see where this goes.

The voice acting for the 2 MCs was a lil iffy and are sort of drowned out by the BGM at times. Maybe its from the mic quality or audio mixing in general but overall it seems like the voice direction for both of them seemed a tad inconsistent with their dialogue but that's a small gripe that'll inevitably improve with time as the characters/premise gets more fleshed out.

Overall, lookin forward to more of this world and cast!

[Spanking With Passion]

yo remember seein this ages ago but couldn't find it again for such a long time. Still as good as the last time

[An Incorrect Summary of WW2]

holy shit this is fuckin rad. Love the whole vibe of this and def want a full series explored with this premise cos theres a ton of untapped potential here. Honestly wish this was a full pilot or at least a short so it could be fleshed out a bit more but goddamn whats already here is pretty great

[Kero Kero Groove - Fighting Snipers]

the last couple seconds had me dyin. Love the retro aesthetic man. Shits right up my alley

[Neo Junk City - Neon Nights]

this looks incredible. Sprite work is absolutely stellar and everything comes together pretty perfectly. Lookin forward to this

[FISHEYE LENS]

lotta great stuff here. Pace was quick but kept the flow goin and dialogue is super snappy which i'm a big fan of. Art style is hella good too. Keep it up man

[Head Empty, Only Pikmin]

this makes me so unbelievably happy, its unreal. Want a full 10 min short of this rn.

Amazing job, reminds me a ton of loco roco too

[OneyPlays Animated: Zach the Gamer]

pretty good stuff man. Short n sweet

FleshGrenade responds:

Thanks